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Topic sentence: One of the most famous and successfull pop singers of all time was Michael Jackson.
In an essay outline we have a thesis statement and not a topic sentence.
Example 1: - Michael Jackson was an American pop singer
- He was given the name of the ' King of Pop'
Michael Jackson started his career as a singer with his brothers, being the youngest member of the group called the 'Jackson 5'. In the group he was the lead singer and one of the best young singers at the time. The 'Jackson 5', helped him to become recognisible and lovable to the audience.
After several years of a successful solo career, in 1982, his album 'Thriller' gained an extraordinary fame and success and even nowadays, is still considered the best selling album of all time. However, his physical appearance gradually started to change dramatically, causing to many of his funs shocking feelings. After a terrible fire accident and several reconstructive plastic opperations, his skin colour and face gradually started to change from black to white. However, his changing image did not diminish his enormous success, which gave him fame and lots of money. He managed to win 13 Grammy Awards and 26 American Music Awards and that gave him a place to the 'Guinness World records'. He was not only a great singer but also one of the most talented dancers. His funs loved his complicated dance techiques and all his concerts were sold-out!
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Despite a famous singer and dancer, Michael Jackson was a humanitarian and a philathropist, since he donated milions of dollars in order to help poor children to have a better life. Also, he donated money to a lot of charities and foundations. His love for children made him build the 'Neverland', a place where children could live and play with safety. The 'Neverland' looked like a castle, and it was said to be his own 'heaven'; perhaps because he lived there with his three children after having two marriages. In 1993, he was accused of a child sexual abuse from the father of one of the children that was a quest in the 'Neverland', but no charges were brought.However, this caused a tremendous damage to him, not only professionally but also personally. In 2009, his dynamic come-back concert, entitled 'This is it'; that was going to be the final one, never became a reality, as three days before the concert, he died from a heart attack, at the age of 50.
Michael Jackson has proved that was among the greatest pop singers of all time and that he turned talent into greateness through his hard work and personality. His fame and talent, even after his death, remains vivid in our hearts.
Michael Jackson was a famous American pop singer

- He was accused of a child sexual abuse in 1993 but no charges were brought
- He died at the age of 50 from a heart attack while preparing for the 'This Is It' concert tour in 2009
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Essay
One of the most famous and successfull pop singers of all time was Michael Jackson. He was born in 1958, in America and his strong personality, along with his unique performances on stage, made him the idol of many later artists and performers. His great talent helped him to gain millions of funs all around the world, who otherwise called him the 'King of Pop'.
the time. The 'Jackson 5', helped him to become recognisible and lovable to the audience.
After several years of a successful solo career, in 1982, his album 'Thriller' gained an extraordinary fame and success and even nowadays, is still considered the best selling album of all time. However, his physical appearance gradually started to change dramatically, causing to many of his funs shocking feelings. After a terrible fire accident and several reconstructive plastic opperations, his skin colour and face gradually started to change from black to white. However, his changing image did not diminish his enormous success, which gave him fame and lots of money. He managed to win 13 Grammy Awards and 26 American Music Awards and that gave him a place to the 'Guinness World records'. He was not only a great singer but also one of the most talented dancers. His funs loved his complicated dance techiques and all his concerts were sold-out!
money to lotsa lot of charities and foundations. His love for children made him build the 'Neverland', a place where children could live and play with safety. The 'Neverland' looked like a castle, and it was said to be his own 'heaven'; perhaps because he lived there with his three children after having two marriages. In 1993, he was accused of a child sexual abuse from the father of one of the children that was a quest in the 'Neverland', but no charges were brought.However, this caused a tremendous damage to him, not only professionally but also personally. In 2009, his dynamic come-back concert, entitled 'This is it'; that was going to be the final one, never became a reality, as three days before the concert, he died from a heart attack, at the age of 50.
Michael Jackson has proved that was among the greatest pop singers of all time and that he turned talent into greateness through his hard work and personality. His fame and talent, even after his death, remains vivid in our hearts.
Michael Jackson was a famous American pop singer

- Accused of a child sexual abuse
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successfull pop singersingers of all
Example 1: - Michael Jackson was an American pop singer
- He was given the name of the ' King of Pop'
with his brothersbrothers: the 'Jackson 5'
Example 2: - After several years of a successful solo career, in 1982 his album 'Thriller' is still considered the best selling album of all time
- After several plastic surgeries he changed his colour appearance from black to white
- He married twice and had three children
Example 2: - After several years of a successful solo career, in 1982 he album 'Thriller' is still considered the best selling album of all time
- His enormous success made him extremely famous and rich
- He won 13 Grammy Awards and 26 American Music Awards and that gave him a place to the 'Guinness World records'
Example 3: - Humanitarian and Philanthropist; he donated milions of dollars to help poor children and supported many charities
- He loved children and he built the 'Neverland' for them to have a place to live and play with safety
- He married twice and had three children
- He was accused of a child sexual abuse in 1993 but no charges were brought
- He died at the age of 50 from a heart attack while preparing for the 'This Is It' concert tour in 2009
Conclusion: Michael Jackson has proved that he was among the greatest pop singers of all time and that he turned talent into greateness through his hard work.
Essay
One of the most famous and successfull pop singers of all time was Michael Jackson. He was born in 1958, in America and his strong personality, along with his unique performances on stage, made him the idol of many later artists and performers. His great talent helped him to gain millions of funs all around the world, who otherwise called him the 'King of Pop'.
Michael Jackson started his career as a singer with his brothers, being the youngest member of the group called the 'Jackson 5'. In the group he was the lead singer and one of the best young singers at the time.
After several years of a successful solo career, in 1982, his album 'Thriller' gained an extraordinary fame and success and even nowadays, is still considered the best selling album of all time. However, his physical appearance gradually started to change dramatically, causing to many of his funs shocking feelings. After a terrible fire accident and several reconstructive plastic opperations, his skin colour and face gradually started to change from black to white. However, his changing image did not diminish his enormous success, which gave him fame and lots of money. He managed to win 13 Grammy Awards and 26 American Music Awards and that gave him a place to the 'Guinness World records'. He was not only a great singer but also one of the most talented dancers. His funs loved his complicated dance techiques and all his concerts were sold-out!
Despite a famous singer and dancer, Michael Jackson was a humanitarian and a philathropist, since he donated milions of dollars in order to help poor children to have a better life. Also, he donated money to lots of charities and foundations.
Michael Jackson was a famous American pop singer

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- Michael Jackson
- Pop singer
- Changing appearance ( from black to white)
- Very rich and famous
- Unique pop artist
- Humanitarian and Philanthropist
- Love for children
- Successfull
- Great dancer
- Guinness World records
- Died at the age of 50
- Song 'Thriller'
- American singer
- Married twice: has three children
- 'This is it'
- Accused of a child sexual abuse
Outline
Topic sentence: One of the most famous and successfull pop singer of all time was Michael Jackson.
Example 1: - Michael Jackson was an American pop singer
- He was given the name of the ' King of Pop'
- Became famous at the early 60s with his brothers the 'Jackson 5'
- After several plastic surgeries he changed his colour appearance from black to white
- He married twice and had three children
Example 2: - After several years of a successful solo career, in 1982 he album 'Thriller' is still considered the best selling album of all time
- His enormous success made him extremely famous and rich
- He won 13 Grammy Awards and 26 American Music Awards and that gave him a place to the 'Guinness World records'
- He was not only a great pop singer but his funs also loved him for his complicated dance techniques
Example 3: - Humanitarian and Philanthropist; he donated milions of dollars to help poor children and supported many charities
- He loved children and he built the 'Neverland' for them to have a place to live and play with safety
- He was accused of a child sexual abuse in 1993 but no charges were brought
- He died at the age of 50 from a heart attack while preparing for the 'This Is It' concert tour in 2009
Conclusion: Michael Jackson has proved that he was among the greatest pop singers of all time and that he turned talent into greateness through his hard work.
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Mr George Theocharous was born in Cyprus and he is Cypriot.He was born in Pafos but now he lives in Nicosia. His mother tongue is Greek and his second language is French.He has three brothers and a sister who they are younger than him.He finished highier education.His favourite subjects were Gymnastics and Art but he didn't like Maths and History.He has two friends George and Michalis and they study with him sports science .Mr George is not working because he doesn't have enough free time, however he always finds some time for fishing and water sports.His Email Address is Theoharous@hotmail.com and the wedsite he is using is the wikispaces.
Mr George Theocharous was born in Cyprus and he is Cypriot.He was born in Pafos but now he lives in Nicosia. His mother tongue is Greek and his second language is French.He has three brothers and a sister who delete this word: they are younger than him.He finished highier education.His favourite subjects were Gymnastics and Art but he didn't like Maths and History.He has two friends George and Michalis and they study with him sports science .Mr George is not working because he doesn't have enough free time, however he always finds some time for fishing and water sports.His Email Address is Theoharous@hotmail.com and the wedsite he is using is the wikispaces.