Topic sentence:On octonder 17, 2009 When I opened the door of the house I saw same strange and unbelievable things.
To the left:
- an open window
- a sink
Back wall:
- a double door
- a painting on the wall
- a double fridge
Right wall:
- two wardrobes
Floor:
- a table ( six sets of plates, forgs and knifes)
-six chairs
- broken plates around the table
- one man lying down with a stamped knife on his chest
-broken glasses around the table
conclusion
As a detective I will thoroughly investigate the crime scene and I certify that I will find exactly what happened.
Topic sentence:On octonder 17, 2009 When I opened the door of the house I saw same strange and unbelievable things.
To the left:
- an open window
- a sink
Back wall:
- a double door
- a painting on the wall
- a double fridge
Right wall:
- two wardrobes
Floor:
- a table ( six sets of plates, forgs and knifes)
-six chairs
- broken plates around the table
- one man lying down with a stamped knife on his chest
-broken glasses around the table
conclusion
As a detective I will thoroughly investigate the crime scene and I certify that I will find exactly what happened.